Since I was absent from your class for two different days, I do not know if I can create a very effective thesis, but I will try to construct one to the best of my ability.
As for the other journals, I'll talk to to you about them tommorrow morning before.
Thesis: People must show themselves openly, not stay under the cover of their desires.
Scene Analysis of Remember The Titans
16 years ago
"under the covers" "openly" - these are too vague. You need to think about the "so what" - why does our author convey this, if indeed he does.
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